Talk:Granata 2022 Abstract Bioblast
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Comment by the Reviewer
Donnelly Chris 2022-05-30
- A reservation about the abstract in this format would be that the third paragraph is rather dense with information. It could benefit from breaking up/condensing some of this to align with the main point. In particular the first sentence of this paragraph is four lines long and mentions that increases in mitochondrial content drive increases in mitochondrial content. I'm not sure this makes sense, but I may be wrong.
